Winter Stalking
white snow marks off black tree trunks
walking stalking trees too move
sharp stiff trees stare back at me
taller damp and green blue moss hidden
they watch my gray eyes
with their hazel ones in silent decay
their wet dark moist mold infected
outer layers protect a living core
selfish earth you reach up mangling
forcing entwining your new chances
to grow into gorge out and push apart
to conquer not just wood but stone
I sit on a flat stone but am not safe
it waits under your powder-blue film
of moss lichens clinging prying
here in the winter wood
injured tree and rock and I wait
for inevitable creeping clawing and smell
that acid smell of earth it’s everywhere
come to take in all of us the fallen ones
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-J.J.Brown 2012, from Natural Supernatural Love
for dVerse Open Link Night http://dversepoets.com/
felt decay here…the scent…your verse made me smell it.. cool pics as well..
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dang…moving…on the dead ones…there in the end…i really liked your imagery of the nature elements…easy to see and smell….
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Brian thanks, I sat on a rock a long time the day I wrote the poem – and could feel the decay happening there around me.
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Your verse makes it easy to imagine the roots of trees growing, moving, millimeter by millimeter, breaking through soil and rock and concrete, searching for water or space or sunlight with every microscopic stretch. Beautifully visual.
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Thanks Samuel, I’m happy it brings you “there”. Roots of trees and lichens – the little mosses – are so amazingly strong and important in the earth cycle.
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Wow! This is the first of your poetry I have read and it won’t be the last. I can smell the earth and feel the wet ground and we have been in a drought since May.
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Delaina thankyou for visiting! I write more fiction than poems but I love poems the most.
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I savor nature poetry and imagery. The sounds of this one read-aloud” feel so good” in the mouth!
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Thanks Victoria, reading poems aloud makes them alive. When the poem comes to me it is always as a spoken piece, then I write it down. Great to meet you through dVerse poetry site.
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